May 11, 2008...9:20 am
Meet me in the future…
Meet me in the future,
there’s no telling of how I would be…
Getting on the crowded train,
An expressionless face,
she is all what we see,
an empty woman with a career,
No life, nothing,
simply money.
Or, would it be different?
A warm and charming smile,
in her arms, she hold someone,
her little girl, her world,
as she watches over the garden,
another smile welcomes her,
that of the one who holds her heart…
Meet me in the future,
This is all how it’s supposed to be.
The trends are changing,
Life depends solely one me.
Meet me in the future.
Somewhere the present “me”
would not be.
I want to meet the “me” in the future.
To show her how life should be.
Hello people. I’m back after a long time. For how long, I don’t know. I remember saying I was back the last time as well. :p Here is a little something that I wrote today. Kinda different. I was inspired… by… my SATS exams. Well, how? I don’t want to say :p I thought of it in the shower and knew I just had to post it NOW! I’m running late, so I’ll be quick. :p The little blog is now one year and 3 weeks old. Happy Birthday xD And Have a nice day everyone *grin*
8 Comments
May 11, 2008 at 3:32 pm
Nice to hear from you again ! Your poem is really nice!I like it and it´s true!
Thank you so much for your wonderful letter to me!I received it yesterday! I love all - it´s so nice!Thanks a lot!
I will write about your nice gift in my blog in the next days!
Have a nice weekend!!
Steffi
May 11, 2008 at 3:40 pm
Oh! You received it already? I’m glad you liked it ^.^ Are you drooling over the beaches yet? :p And thanks!
May 11, 2008 at 4:41 pm
Hei Nus Dear
Grrreat that you are back!
Do not worry about the on-off because we all have sometimes or another this phase in our lives.
I really love this poem for it is very deep and like a peek into the future. CONGRATS on the writing.
Keep so well and safe. Rii
May 13, 2008 at 4:16 pm
Please look in my blog…Today I posted about your nice surprise!Yes, I love beaches ….It´s a really nice place where you live and I wish we could change.Much better as here in a big city ;O(!
May 14, 2008 at 9:06 am
Hmm, I like it!
May 14, 2008 at 11:50 am
What the future may bring - we can never know and yet your intrigue of the future - within such an illuminating poem - allows a glimpse for sure.
May 14, 2008 at 10:42 pm
Hello! Hello!
It’s lovely and I can relate to certain parts of it.
It looks nice and fresh in here and I’m glad you see you back again! :o)
May 15, 2008 at 2:51 pm
hi there!
i’m glad you’re back… inspired by the SAT’s hmmm… well, i kinda liked the IQ/logic test — you know the one with shapes or trying to find the next number/figure in the sequence… don’t now though if it is still included because i did that a loooong, looong time ago *grins*…
i like your new layout… it looks so “crisp”:)… and i
enjoyed your big bang and time relativity entries… especially the latter… so i guess that cancels out the “back to the future” theme, maybe “next” (the movie of nicolas cage) holds more water… in any case, i think it makes sense if you put in the energy factor… but then, maybe i’ wrong… whatever, time travel fascinates me and your recent entries brought out the geeky part of me :)…
enjoy the rest of the week… and i hope you get good lights now…
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