Checkmate
This game is too tight. Dead sure you will win. Too small in front of you; a giant, invincible. You won, i lost, checkmate, congrats my mate.
Your unsurprising disappearance is appearing before me. So many years have passed and yet so many memories. They are still so fresh in the minds. Had you been here, a guru would you have been. A great follower would i have been. Sadly you are no more present.
Happy shall you feel, away, alone shall be… warm shall be the welcome and nice were those present. Big was the room, so was your heart. Shit was me, so was I destined. Cruel was I, such was it decided. Egoist, anarchist, so was i told to be. So were they sitting, white was the outfit, why not. So were you also invited, immoral to think of your absence. The creator was you. How can you not be worshipped. Peace be upon your heart, filled with shit. Calm shall i be, to love shall I not commit, under my name lies such a sin. The sin which holds my name. The sin of being born. Reflection shall there be upon. Such was the punishment deserved.
The awaiting end nearing so hastily, Fast is the sun vanishing and such is the sea chanting goodbye. The cold breeze coming from the upper lands quietly brings the demon of pain. Each time this breeze blows, harsher does the pain grow.. And so lowly do I feel. Blood will not be seen, it was already taken.
Dry were the bones, and withered was the flesh. Sad was the discovery, dirty was the body. Happy was she. So shall time judge
How come a post by you has no comments?
I’m surprised…
He Who Has No Name said this on November 26, 2007 at 7:08 pm
Post is not by me… But a post by Paw definitely deserves a comment, I’d agree. Beautifully written but you shouldn’t really be thinking ’bout those things…
bbZuSh said this on November 26, 2007 at 7:53 pm
beautifully written! The language is very poetic. And I personally think the word “shit” in this text is quite original. I’ve never seen that before.
morinn said this on November 26, 2007 at 7:57 pm
I agree with you, bbZush… His post really deserves a comm… It’s really beautiful the way you expressed yourself here, hon’… Just wished you’d not think about those things… Take care…
sayuka said this on November 26, 2007 at 8:11 pm
thank you for the comments you all
@bbzush & sayuka… I wrote this a few weeks ago.. and i shall admit that i was really very down while writing that night.
@morinn.. thanks for the “compliment” and i like your way at looking at it.. I tried to jot down the feelig i had at that particular time and i used the words as it came in my mind..
However, I’m now feeling better, and i shall say a special thanks to sayuka who gave me a solid support all the way long. Thanks a lot once again Hon’
boomparwez said this on November 26, 2007 at 8:44 pm
I know you did and I think I did tell you that at that time…
Et moi je compte pas?
bbZuSh said this on November 26, 2007 at 9:17 pm
lol bbzush ! twa si to konter baba
tu le sai na 
thx twa si baba 
boomparwez said this on November 26, 2007 at 9:20 pm
Expressive with a challenging mind and the following caught my eye:
“And so lowly do I feel. Blood will not be seen, it was already taken.”
Keep writing – never hide from emotion..
philosophyoflife said this on November 26, 2007 at 11:35 pm
what kind of disappearance you are talking about?
Custom SLA Programming said this on December 9, 2007 at 10:41 am
that dissapearance is death in aother word.. i wrote the death of someone very dear to me who dissapeared(died) and i miss that person.
boomparwez said this on December 9, 2007 at 2:16 pm